Changes in my Narrative

     In my literacy narrative, I wish I would have included more details of each situation or literacy sponsor I wrote about. I was very straight forward with minor details. I used some descriptive words however the situations and people could have been described better in order to establish a better idea of what I was feeling.  It would have made my paper longer as well as increase the overall content of my paper. I am sure I will find plenty of things to improve on besides being more descriptive once I receive my paper.